MISC: One Day at a Time: The Chronicles of Mike Kittyman #19

[Andrew Perron]

On Sat, 3 Sep 2011 03:22:55 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> Informality and spontaneity are your strengths as a writer. 
> Run with them.

This is very true!

> But if you *would* like a bit of serious critique:  "you're" and 
> "whether".  When you learn the right words, editors will like you more.

This is also very true. >.>

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, snip snop