MISC: One Day at a Time: The Chronicles of Mike Kittyman #19
mason.james.jamesmason at gmail.com
Sat Sep 3 08:31:08 PDT 2011
On Sep 2, 11:22 pm, Scott Eiler <sei... at eilertech.com> wrote:
> Informality and spontaneity are your strengths as a writer.
> Run with them.
Well I have been feeling very burble Lately. Though that's probably
because of the Wild blue yonder kicking my ass at living contests.
> But if you *would* like a bit of serious critique: "you're" and
> "whether". When you learn the right words, editors will like you more.
Yeah thats why I has an eatator.
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