SW10, CONTEST: Rednecks from Mars - The Red Planet!

Andrew Perron pwerdna at gmail.com
Sun May 23 08:05:36 PDT 2010

On Sat, 22 May 2010 23:25:04 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> Commentator: Jason L. Cletus with Sylvester Morrow for the World
> Journal Monthly.

Cletus?  C'mon. `` (But at least it's a last name.)

Anyway!  Other than that, the main character felt like a member of this
subculture without being a stereotype.  Well-done!

The plot itself was good, although there didn't really seem to be suspense.
Possibly a limitation of the first-person after-the-fact report format?

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, or something!

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