SW10, CONTEST: Rednecks from Mars - The Red Planet!

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On May 23, 11:05Â am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Sat, 22 May 2010 23:25:04 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> The plot itself was good, although there didn't really seem to be suspense.
> Possibly a limitation of the first-person after-the-fact report format?
>
> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, or something!

I agree.  Didn't really seem to be a 'conflict' involved, other than
'meeting the new neighbors'.