TOF: The Truth About Fiction #7

[Andrew Perron]

On 8/22/2015 2:32 PM, Michael D Friedman wrote:
>Actually, it was supposed to be happening at the same time, not a flashback..
 > It's a little confusing because I switched to past tense for that section,
 > basically because Austin is telling it from his point of view -- hearing it
 > after the fact. I didn't read right to me when I wrote it in present tense,
 > but maybe I should have. After all, I did the same thing with Peliculas in
 > the previous issue.

For the record, I interpreted that section as intended.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, in terms of chronology, anyway