MISC/HCC: Team Xero #15

[Jamas Enright]

On Sun, 15 Jan 2012, Andrew Perron wrote:

> Jeez, narrator, what's wrong with in medias res? >:/

She doesn't get her opening scene if they jump right into it.

> grammatically correct, it parses weird.  The one thing I would have added
> was some sort of twist on how things were resolved, having it *not* follow
> the pattern they predicted at the beginning.

That's an excellent idea, and wish it had occured to me.

-- 
Jamas Enright
Blog: http://www.jamasenright.com
Homepage: http://www.eyrie.org/~thad/