[MV] The Super Wizard From Space #28: To Hell And Hell And Hell And Hell And Hell And Back Again, Part 4

Andrew Perron pwerdna at gmail.com
Wed Apr 11 08:35:35 PDT 2012

On Wed, 11 Apr 2012 14:48:06 +0000 (UTC), Wil Alambre wrote:

>>> She gave a slow nod that rested her head against the wall. "Deliver me
>>> from the reasons why," she said with a desperate whisper. "I'll never
>>> cry. I'd rather fly."
>> I get the feeling that there's something to her speech pattern that I'm not
>> quite getting.
> Nothing too insidious. I happened to be listening to The Doors while 
> writing, and the lyrics to "Crystal Ship" fit. Since the rest of the story 
> was pretty dark, I tossed that in just to lighten it up a bit for myself.

Ah, see, I thought it might have been a lyrical reference. XD That works.

>>> "It shouldn't been this way," the Devil said. "It was scripted a
>>> different way, but when the time came, we didn't act." The wizard turned
>>> his head to look at the Devil and saw an expression of angry
>>> understanding on the thin face.
>> Hm.  I don't think I quite understand. 
> Just a note to myself from myself. The issue was literally written a 
> different way, but because I dropped the ball and didn't do any writing for 
> a couple months, when I finally came back to it, I decided to go in a 
> different direction. The story acknowledges months have passed, with the 
> Language taking advantage of the lapse, and the Devil is acknowledging 
> this. Its pretty fourth-wall-y but I won't make it a habit :)

Ohhhhhhh!  Okay, that makes a lot of sense then. <3 Awesome.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, satisfied.

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