[MISC] GODLING # 17: Trapped!

[Scott Eiler]

On Oct 6, 10:02Â am, jvdsteen <jvdst... at hotmail.com> wrote:
> [MISC] GODLING # 17: Â Trapped!
> by J. Vandersteen
>
> RACC'S FAVORITE PROTAGONIST – GODLING – THE ONE MAN PANTHEON in:
> Â  Â  Â  Â  Â  Â  Â  Â  Â  Â  Â  Â TRAPPED

Maybe we could have a vote sometime, but I'll concede "favorite"
status for now.

> Speed Metal is buried underneath a rack of books.
...
> “May I introduce you to my friends, Mr. Gator, Mr. Napalm and Mr.
> Morpho,” a voice said. Then Death Dog appeared. “I think you still
> remember me? We’re going to kick your ass, hero.”
>
> NEXT: DEFEATED!

Your story is suspenseful and action-packed as usual.  But is there a
reason you used present tense early in the story and past tense later?