[MISC] GODLING # 17: Trapped!
seiler at eilertech.com
Fri Oct 8 20:15:36 PDT 2010
On Oct 6, 10:02Â am, jvdsteen <jvdst... at hotmail.com> wrote:
> [MISC] GODLING # 17: Â Trapped!
> by J. Vandersteen
> RACC'S FAVORITE PROTAGONIST â GODLING â THE ONE MAN PANTHEON in:
> Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â TRAPPED
Maybe we could have a vote sometime, but I'll concede "favorite"
status for now.
> Speed Metal is buried underneath a rack of books.
> âMay I introduce you to my friends, Mr. Gator, Mr. Napalm and Mr.
> Morpho,â a voice said. Then Death Dog appeared. âI think you still
> remember me? Weâre going to kick your ass, hero.â
> NEXT: DEFEATED!
Your story is suspenseful and action-packed as usual. But is there a
reason you used present tense early in the story and past tense later?
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