[ietf-nntp] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-nntpext-authinfo-00.txt

[Ruud H.G. van Tol]

>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-nntpext-authinfo-00.txt

More spelling and lay-out remarks:

> to indicate that the *datas-
> tream* is insufficiently secure

(misplaced continuation sign)


> If the *the* SASL mechanism 

(double the)


> therefore send *an* LIST EXTENSIONS command as 

(a)


> and have *be* omitted
> may have *be* modified 

(been, or rephrase)


> implementors

(implementers?)


> authentication mechanisms development 

(why the plural?)


Several <noun><space>which that look better to me when 
changed to <noun><space>that.

Implement at will, of course.

-- 
Grtz, Ruud