ietf-nntp Minor typos
Clive D.W. Feather
clive at demon.net
Tue Nov 14 01:38:09 PST 2000
At least some of these are my fault.
Page 4 section 4:
MUST NOT considered part -> MUST NOT be considered part
Page 7 section 5 (last paragraph);
and not two -> and not to
Page 7 section 5.1:
The paragraph needs indenting two spaces, just like the rest of the
text. There is no blank line before section 5.2.
Page 11 section 8.1:
a server early in the session for extensions session ->
the server early in the session for extensions information
Page 21 section 9.2.1.1:
only occurs if an article number -> only occurs if no article number
At various places in the document you use the term "client NNTP" or
"server NNTP". Given the meaning of "NNTP", shouldn't these be "NNTP client"
and "NNTP server" respectively ?
--
Clive D.W. Feather | Work: <clive at demon.net> | Tel: +44 20 8371 1138
Internet Expert | Home: <clive at davros.org> | Fax: +44 20 8371 1037
Demon Internet | WWW: http://www.davros.org | DFax: +44 20 8371 4037
Thus plc | | Mobile: +44 7973 377646
More information about the ietf-nntp
mailing list