SW10: The Last Chocolate Crop

[Andrew Perron]

On Sat, 20 Feb 2010 19:05:33 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> On Feb 20, 1:32 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
>> On Fri, 19 Feb 2010 01:46:57 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
>>
>> Nice!  Far more narratively complete than a lot of your earlier stuff, with
>> some good crunchy detail.  Only complaint: The ending felt a bit abrupt.
> 
> Thanks!  Sorry about the ending; Adu was tired and so was I.

That's fair.

>> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, and some good future plot hooks!
> 
> Everything's a plot hook in my world, but I was actually trying to
> hang something on a previous hook.  I've used this main character for
> several years now, but until now I haven't considered his powers or
> their origin.  Now I should really consider his costume, so I can make
> a cover for the story.

Ooh, neat.  He did feel more realized.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, who has no idea how to do a
non-offensive African tribal costume.