SW10: The Last Chocolate Crop
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Sat Feb 20 21:03:02 PST 2010
On Sat, 20 Feb 2010 19:05:33 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> On Feb 20, 1:32 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
>> On Fri, 19 Feb 2010 01:46:57 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
>> Nice! Far more narratively complete than a lot of your earlier stuff, with
>> some good crunchy detail. Only complaint: The ending felt a bit abrupt.
> Thanks! Sorry about the ending; Adu was tired and so was I.
>> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, and some good future plot hooks!
> Everything's a plot hook in my world, but I was actually trying to
> hang something on a previous hook. I've used this main character for
> several years now, but until now I haven't considered his powers or
> their origin. Now I should really consider his costume, so I can make
> a cover for the story.
Ooh, neat. He did feel more realized.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, who has no idea how to do a
non-offensive African tribal costume.
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