ASH: Coherent Super Stories Special #1a extended scenes

[Scott Eiler]

On 2023-10-09 20:37, Dave Van Domelen wrote:
> Editor's Note: These scenes represent a later edit to Coherent Super 
> Stories Special #1, and in the meta-fictional universe that's part of 
> I'm just gonna call this a retcon and say they were always part of the 
> original file.

That's the way my stories work also.  Most of them have never made it 
into newsgroups, so I just update them freely.  There was one time I 
republished the whole update into RACC, 'cause I (correctly) determined 
people would notice I'd added a bunch of Victorian adventurers to my 
superhero story.  But I appreciate the way you gave us a small update, 
because I still remember your original story.

And since you asked...  Your depiction of train travel into Chicago was 
fine.  I assume Cameron went by Amtrak (assuming Amtrak still exists 
after the "Benefactor" incident), but that detail is not important to 
the story.

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