LNH/LUNA/ACRA: The Liminals #5: Bondage and Determination, part 1
Scott Eiler
seiler at eilertech.com
Sun Oct 25 19:41:10 PDT 2020
On 2020-10-24 20:40, Jeanne Morningstar wrote:
> She bit down just a little on his neck and he let out a sharp moan of
> pleasure. Maria grabbed ahold of his wrists and pressed him down on the
> couch. Masterplan Lad gasped in delight. They ignored the ostrich who
> stood sentinel over the couch.
>
> And then, suddenly, he remembered he was in a story that people were
> reading. There were people watching him this very moment. He was unsure
> about both whether he'd be able to handle that on top of everything else
> and its appropriateness to RACC. The Woody Incident was long ago, but he
> still decided it would be best to drop a scene transition. While Maria
> nibbled on his ear, he reached over and fumbled with his Plot Device to
> end the scene.
I'll say: (1) I liked this episode, especially how Masterplan Lad is
not playing it safe. (2) But "fumbled with his Plot Device to end the
scene" sounds like a euphemism to me. ;)
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The soldiers presented a pathetic but inspiring spectacle. The
hospitals were crowded with sick and wounded; the walls were
gradually crumbling under incessant shell fire, yet that garrison
of heroes remained undaunted.
It was as Buck said, "just as if they had been Americans."
- from "The Airship Boys in the Great War", De Lysle F. Cass, 1915.
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