DIVA: Royals #5

Scott Eiler seiler at eilertech.com
Sun Mar 17 16:48:19 PDT 2019

On 2019-03-10 10:35, deucexm wrote:
> I've been sitting on this one for a while, I think because the series deserves
> careful consideration so its particular... atmosphere isn't unduly disrupted.
> But then again it also needs to be /written/, so it can be read.  So here it is!

I think you've preserved the atmosphere, and even enhanced it.

> Royals: A DiVerse Alpha Chronicle
> by Felix
> 05
> Down, down, into depths where he could neither see nor sense in any other way,
> the little Prince sank.
> At last he landed on something soft and springy, and bent down to feel at it -
> and found it... furry.  Taken aback, he felt around to see if he could move off
> to somewhere that felt less, well, /alive/  - but the fur extended beneath his
> sandals no matter which direction he tested.

A little prince falls onto a magic furry beast?  Yeah, that enhances the 

And the resolution of the prince's quest made sense too.

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