DIVA: Royals #5
Scott Eiler
seiler at eilertech.com
Sun Mar 17 16:48:19 PDT 2019
On 2019-03-10 10:35, deucexm wrote:
> I've been sitting on this one for a while, I think because the series deserves
> careful consideration so its particular... atmosphere isn't unduly disrupted.
> But then again it also needs to be /written/, so it can be read. So here it is!
I think you've preserved the atmosphere, and even enhanced it.
> Royals: A DiVerse Alpha Chronicle
> by Felix
>
> 05
>
> Down, down, into depths where he could neither see nor sense in any other way,
> the little Prince sank.
>
> At last he landed on something soft and springy, and bent down to feel at it -
> and found it... furry. Taken aback, he felt around to see if he could move off
> to somewhere that felt less, well, /alive/ - but the fur extended beneath his
> sandals no matter which direction he tested.
A little prince falls onto a magic furry beast? Yeah, that enhances the
atmosphere.
And the resolution of the prince's quest made sense too.
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