SW10/REVIEW: Catalog of Earths, 2016 Update #5 of 5: Recently-Discovered Universes
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Fri Jan 27 10:42:13 PST 2017
On Sunday, January 1, 2017 at 8:30:38 PM UTC-6, Scott Eiler wrote:
> UNIVERSE: The "DiVerse"
> - Activity: occasional
Well, that's a little generous. I wish it was more; I was just barely able to
finish up my Medley piece for this month due to a lot of personal reasons, but
I'm hoping to do more in the near future.
> - Critique: The center of action moves around. The action is well
> written, and always on human level. "Jetbird and the Kid" continue, and
> is at the point of excitement. "Captain Calamity" has shown up in the
> last year; it's a start. "Systemic" has also shown up; it shows great
> promise. This universe is full of promise... but not much action yet.
> Exactly like, starting stories but not finishing them.
This is fair on all points, I think. I tend to start-and-not-finish things a
lot, since focusing on a single storyline can be a little difficult at times -
particularly when I'm trying to follow a particular mood or whatnot that helps
drive the narrative, so that when I fall out of that mood the progress falls
off as well.
It's difficult to get back into the headspace I need for some of these plots,
but I do intend to finish them, or at least continue them. It's all one big
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