8FOLD/HCC: Journey Into # 24, "The Vampire Sun"
Scott Eiler
seiler at eilertech.com
Tue Feb 9 17:13:09 PST 2016
On 2016-02-08 08:12, Tom Russell wrote:
> "THE VAMPIRE SUN"
> ~~A HIGH CONCEPT ADVENTURE~~
> ~BY TOM RUSSELL~
>
>
> The LAST STORY has been told. EARTH
> endures, but is vulnerable and alone in
> the universe. All signs indicate that the
> PULSE COLLECTIVE is making preparations for
> its next attack, and that Earth is unlikely to
> survive without allies. KNOCKOUT MOUSE and JULIE
> ANN JUSTICE are sent on a top-secret intergalactic
> diplomatic mission, one that takes Julie Ann to the
> ruins of her own home planet...
I sense the High Concept Challenge wandered on to the tracks in front of
this oncoming plot train. But the scrolling summary is a nice challenge
touch. And the Prospective New Ally to Fight the Pulse Collective is a
great plot twist.
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(signed) Scott Eiler 8{D> -------- http://www.eilertech.com/ ---------
When you *are* the leader... whatever goes wrong... whether you did it
or not... *you* are held responsible. - Barack Obama
I know. - Archie Andrews
- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.
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