REPOST: RAC Challenge! #10
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Thu Oct 8 12:48:41 PDT 2015
On 10/7/2015 7:04 PM, Arthur Spitzer wrote:
> "Paragon, wake up," a female voice is heard by Paragon. Then with
> realization, the identity of the voice enters his head.
> "Myrna," Paragon struggles to say, "Then it was all a dream"
> "You've been laying here next to the stadium since Spurgo nailed you
> with a backhand. We're all looking for you. Luckily, I found you
Ah, this is bringing back the things that were retconned into being a dream as
"the real reality". Is this where the twists and turns of RACChallenge retcons
finally and fatally become too much!?
> Paragon goes on, "Earlier today, Dr. Malevo had me trapped in a
> building set with explosives. He chose to let me out rather than blow
> me up along with the Jaz Rswert. The reason being that when he let
> that 700 foot monster loose, the Jaz Rswert had a fail-safe chip in
> it that would neutralize Spurgo in case he couldn't be controlled.
> When you two showed up, Malevo was trying to take the chip from me.
> You two stopped him yet he was forced to let the robot loose now
> during the press conference even though he wasn't sure if it was
At the very least, there's an effort to build a consistent reality out of the
> "We had to kill him." Tina says. "We also have to kill the head of a
> company that first created that drug." Tito and Tina simply look at
> Dirk. Dirk drops his coffee.
> "You're saying that my company invented the enhancer?"
> Paragon grabs the edge of his seat. He now realizes that these two
> are not joking with him. "And do you really expect me to take this
> Tina covers her face as if to cry. Tito looks down at Dirk's coffee
> and says in a hurt voice, "You already did."
You know, it's incredibly frustrating to have characters that jump to killing as
a solution, rather than "tell the person who has obvious good intentions and
will believe you not to do the obviously bad thing", and the narrative supports
the idea that this was a Tough Decision That They Had To Make. >:/
> Message to all authors: I'm sorry if anyone is bothered that I turned
> the last bunch of chapters into a big dream. I felt that what was
> left to me was a lot of different ideas going in a lot of different
> directions and this seemed like the best way to clear it all up.
Yeeeeeeeeah, disposing of the efforts of your fellow creators and saying they
didn't really matter is *basically* one of the worst things you can do in a
shared story like this - for said creators, and also for all of the readers who
were invested in those things. "Cleaning things up" definitely isn't worth it -
learn from comics, kids, and their repeated attempts to dismiss things that
don't fit a certain idea of How Things Should Be.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, plus it's just kinda boring.
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