REPOST: RAC Challenge! #10
Arthur Spitzer
arspitzer at earthlink.net
Wed Oct 7 16:04:01 PDT 2015
Chapter by Mark Rosendorf..
From: franke at ucs.indiana.edu (Jerry L Franke)
Newsgroups: rec.arts.comics.creative
Subject: REPOST: RAC Challenge! Ch. 10
Date: 10 Nov 1995 15:02:18 GMT
Continuing the retrospective...
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RAC CHALLENGE
Chapter 10: I got those Tampa Bay Buccaneers Blues
by Mark Rosendorf
title by Marc "The Jazz" Singer
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Dirk's Diary:
Since escaping two death traps from Dr. Malevo and battling Spurgo
the Conquestor, a 700 foot robot turned psychotic monster, things
really started to get strange. I was met by a group called The
Ultimate Collective who told me that they made me Paragon the
Ultimate man and not my science and electronics. They also told me
that I was unworthy and sent out Mary Lu, the Ultimate Woman to
replace me. She turned evil. Since then, I escaped from the
Ultimate Collective's grasp, teamed up with Dr. Malevo, discovered
that Tito and Tina, a couple of kids who helped me escape from
Malevo's clutches earlier were really my kids, found out that Mary
Lu was the mother of my kids, sent Dr. Malevo to hell, sent Mary Lu
to hell, found out they escaped with the help of Aaron Levitz, a
writer for RAC Challenge, and then things started to get even
weirder. A fight erupted between myself, all the other Ultimates,
the Brussels Sprouts, their enemy, the Belgian Waffle and it all
happened on a world called Brussels where everyone has superpowers.
Finally, an attack from a 3rd grade gym teacher erupted after I had
been put in a trance. The weirdest part off it all is that this all
happened because of some cosmic superball that is supposed to be
responsible for my superpowers. None of this makes sense... Wait a
minute, yes it does. If I can just focus myself and concentrate...
Come on, I've done it before..."
Suddenly, things get blurry, then pure white, then dark, then white
again, and finally blurry again.
"Paragon, wake up," a female voice is heard by Paragon. Then with
realization, the identity of the voice enters his head.
"Myrna," Paragon struggles to say, "Then it was all a dream"
"You've been laying here next to the stadium since Spurgo nailed you
with a backhand. We're all looking for you. Luckily, I found you
first."
"What's going on?" Paragon asks as he finally regains his senses.
"Those Ultimate kids are trying to battle Spurgo but Spurgo is on a
rampage. He's destroying buildings. Please, Paragon, we need your
help!"
"I'll be there," Paragon says as he rises to his knees, "Just give me
a minute to think".
As Myrna runs towards the action, Paragon goes over the very long and
very intense dream he had; or was it a hallucination? He knows he's
had them in the past. At the beginning of his career, these dreams
always helped them solve his missions due to hidden messages within
the dream. "What was this dream trying to tell me?" He thinks. His
photographic memory begins to go over every detail from the Ultimate
Collective to the battle of the Brussels Sprouts vs. the Belgian
Waffle to the Ultimate Woman. "Of course," the Ultimate Man screams
and races into action.
Meanwhile, the Ultimate Twins are standing on a rooftop attempting to
come up with a way to stop Spurgo whose very footsteps put holes into
the ground.
"What are we going to do, Tito," The Ultimate Girl asks her brother.
"We've got to do something otherwise there won't be any point of our
being here. Perhaps if we... Tina watch out!!"
Spurgo reaches at the building the Ultimate Twins are standing on.
Tito jumps out of the way but Tina is grasped in Spurgo's grip.
Suddenly, Paragon leaps from a nearby building onto Spurgo's back.
"Go limp," He yells towards Tina, "and let your brother catch you".
At that point, Paragon manages to open a lid on the back of Spurgo's
head.
"Remove yourself, flee," Spurgo screams, "or I will destroy you."
Spurgo reaches behind to try to swat away Paragon. However, before he
can, Paragon notices inside the lid that within all the circuits is a
slot big enough for the Jaz Rswert that he has had on him the entire
time.
"Time to call you quits, Tin Man," Paragon yells as he fits in the
Jaz Rswert and Spurgo stops moving. Paragon then leaps off of him
towards Tito who is checking on the condition of his sister, Tina.
"What did you do?" asks Tito, "and when did you have time to come up
with it? I thought you were in dreamland."
"I was," Paragon explains, "and the one consistent in my dream was
the Jaz Rswert. I knew my dream was telling me that it was the key."
Tito gives Paragon a weird look.
Paragon goes on, "Earlier today, Dr. Malevo had me trapped in a
building set with explosives. He chose to let me out rather than blow
me up along with the Jaz Rswert. The reason being that when he let
that 700 foot monster loose, the Jaz Rswert had a fail-safe chip in
it that would neutralize Spurgo in case he couldn't be controlled.
When you two showed up, Malevo was trying to take the chip from me.
You two stopped him yet he was forced to let the robot loose now
during the press conference even though he wasn't sure if it was
controllable."
"Are you sure Malevo was behind that thing?" Tina asks.
"Certainly," Paragon responds.
"Well, now what?" Tito asks.
"Now I know how to find Malevo and that's exactly what I'm going to
do."
Tito and Tina simply look at Paragon until Paragon finally turns to
them, "Would you like to help me beat him?"
Tina smiles as Tito nods. Paragon begins to fly.
"We'll do it together," Paragon says as he then mutters under his
breath, "son."
"Tina," Tito whispers to his sister, "Do we really have to go through
with this? He saved your life for Christ's sake"
"You know we do," Tina replies and they set out to follow Paragon.
"Son??!?!" Tito questions with a confused look.
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Jorge Steinhoofer enters an office building in Tampa Bay. He turns to
a desk that is surrounded by trees on three sides. There is a window
on each side just above the trees. Dr. Malevo is sitting behind that
desk.
"I did my best, Master," Steinhoofer pleads. "That monster was not
controllable."
"Your best was not good enough," Malevo announces, "Besides ignoring
my summons to abort the mission, you allowed yourself to be
followed."
"What? By who?" Steinhoofer looks all around.
"By me!" yells Paragon who enters through the door. "Your reign of
terror is finally being put to rest, Malevo."
Malevo laughs. "I do not think so." Malevo hits a button under his
desk and a transparent steel slides across the room separating
himself from Paragon and Steinhoofer. Paragon cannot break it.
"You've been in this situation before, Paragon." Malevo begins to get
up. "This room will explode in 5 seconds and I will not be joining
you." Malevo presses another button and a tree moves to the left
revealing a secret passageway. He continues, "You do not have the Jaz
Rswert or anything else to bail you out." The door slams shut behind
Paragon.
"No!" comes a female cry from behind the trees underneath a now open
window. In a matter of seconds, Tina drop-kicks Malevo as he falls on
top of his desk. Tito hits the button underneath the desk causing the
steel to slide open.
"It's a good thing Paragon held us in reserve," Tito announces.
"Now!" Tina yells as both Tito and Tina both run into Paragon pushing
him and themselves through the door and out of the building. Paragon
immediately presses a button on his belt which puts him and his two
young partners into a forcefield. The building then explodes.
"Do you think he survived?" Tina asks.
"No, I don't" says Paragon, "Damn, It wasn't supposed to end like
this. Listen, let's go back to my place. We have some talking to do."
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The place is now Dirk's penthouse in Tampa Bay. One of the nine he
owns in the United States. Tito and Tina are sitting at the kitchen
table. Dirk, now as the rest of them out of costume puts a cup of
coffee for himself across the table from the twins.
"Damn," Paragon says as he looks at his computers in the den. "So it
wasn't all a dream. According to my readouts, there really is a space
ship coming to earth.
"How about a couple of beers?" Tito asks.
"Two root beers coming up," Dirk says as he enters the kitchen. Tito
and Tina look at each other and nod. Dirk starts shouting from the
kitchen as he gets the drinks. "I don't think you've both been honest
with me yet!"
Paragon reenters the room, drops the drinks in front of the twins and
sits down. "Now how about a little honesty!"
"I don't think you'll believe me," Tina says.
"Try me!" Paragon slams his fist on the table.
"It's time to tell him, Tina," Tito says as he looks down at his
drink.
"Fine," Tina sighs. "But don't say I didn't warn you. Dirk takes a
sip of his coffee as Tina begins. "We're from the year 2055. We were
sent back in time because 10 years from now, Dr. Malevo uses an
invention called the enhancer drug. It allows people to reach their
fullest potential. It makes strong men stronger and smart people even
more brilliant."
"What's wrong with that?" Dirk asks as he takes another gulp of his
coffee having no idea why he's even listening to this.
"Because there was a drawback to this invention. It has a
deterioration factor that effects the part of the body it originally
enhanced. The people that used it to become smarter will become
vegetables and the stronger people will become paralyzed."
"Creators will lose their abilities to create, etc," Tito continues,
"unless Malevo issues a cure into the world's water system every
month. He did so only with the condition that he was named ruler of
the United States."
"Why doesn't the U.S. cut its losses and stop using his enhancer drug
and retaliate?"
"The chemical in the water," Tina explains, "has an addictive tone to
it. If it is not used, then anyone who experienced it will suffer
withdrawal symptoms powerful enough to kill. Malevo killed off all
the scientists in the country and he is currently at war with the
rest of the world for domination."
"His enhanced troops are winning, Dirk," Tito says. "That's why we
came back in time to do what we did."
"You came back in time to kill him!" Dirk yells. "That's why you left
him in that building to die! So you could complete your mission, to
kill him?"
"We had to kill him." Tina says. "We also have to kill the head of a
company that first created that drug." Tito and Tina simply look at
Dirk. Dirk drops his coffee.
"You're saying that my company invented the enhancer?"
"You invented it, Dirk." Tito explains. "We have documented proof of
that."
"And how do you intend on killing me?"
"We have a pill," Tina says as she pulls out a pill from her pocket
and puts it on the table. "This pill has two effects. It will lower
the iron in your blood causing the invulnerability power you gave
yourself to die out. It will then attack your immune system and put
you into an eternal sleep. In essence, it kills you. It will do all
of this in minutes."
Paragon grabs the edge of his seat. He now realizes that these two
are not joking with him. "And do you really expect me to take this
pill?"
Tina covers her face as if to cry. Tito looks down at Dirk's coffee
and says in a hurt voice, "You already did."
Dirk then looks down at his half drunken coffee. Those were the last
words he hears as everything in the room begins to spin. His sight
starts to get blurry. Dirk suddenly wants to sleep.
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And now, the torch is passed to Rob Rogers as he continues RAC
challenge takes a new direction in a story titled: "The Truth that
could have been anywhere else" in:
* Next issue: Chapter 11: The Truth that could have been anywhere
else by Rob Rogers
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Message to all authors: I'm sorry if anyone is bothered that I turned
the last bunch of chapters into a big dream. I felt that what was
left to me was a lot of different ideas going in a lot of different
directions and this seemed like the best way to clear it all up. Now
we have a time travel story... or maybe not, that will be up to Rob
and the rest of the authors of RAC Challenge.
It was a great idea Henry and it was a lot of fun to do. Thanks for
letting me get involved.
Magic
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Jerry L. Franke franke at cs.indiana.edu
Computer Science Dept. Indiana University
formerly from Florida State University http://www.cs.fsu.edu/~franke
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