REPOST: RAC Challenge! #17
Drew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Sun Nov 29 22:20:19 PST 2015
On 11/23/2015 10:09 PM, Arthur Spitzer wrote:
<snip>
> "New, from Nike! You've got The Pump? Sorry, folks. That's yesterday's
> fashion. Don't be caught dead in school without the new Nike Pump
> Action! Supreme Court approved. Offer void where prohibited by state
> law."
Ah, man. Remember shoes you pump up? Only true '90s kids, etc.
> "Thank God," he said to the director, "I thought you were never going
> to end that. So how the hell are the writers going to get me out of
> that one?"
>
> "They're not. You're fired. Don't let the door hit you in the... well,
> you know how it goes."
Pfffff. Well, that's one way to go. XD
> "You can't fire me! How can you fire me? Why? There's been no
> indication that you were going to fire me. Who the hell's writing this
> story?"
> _________________________________________________________________
>
> "Not me, that's for sure," said Poet, selecting the text of the last
> chapter and trashing it--for the fifth time in the last hour.
Recursive metafiction! :D
> Poet let his head fall onto the keyboard in frustration.
>
> "Jesus, Mercedes," he mumbled, "what is your mind on now?"
> _________________________________________________________________
>
> Obviously not the story, thought Dr. Mercedes Silver,
Hah, more recurs--
> as she looked
> over at Tito, the Ultimate Kid, lying asleep in her hotel bed, his
> mouth half open, and the cutest drool hanging out. Last night that had
> been the inspiration for Tito's brain damage. This night Tito's strong
> young body was a more than literary inspiration.
>
> Keep your mind on your work, girl, she thought. Gotta have this done
> tomorrow or "the villain Franke" will have my ass.
o-o So I tend to interpret "kid" more literally than a lot of writers, I think
is the takeaway here.
> "What a curious feeling!" thought Matt, "I must be shutting up like a
> telescope."
Ooooo, Alice in Wonderland references, splendid.
> The cat returned with a wooden box labeled "tomatoes", tossed Matt
> into it, and announced, "I'm marrying the lizard to London."
>
> He once more disappeared--except for the smile, which leered at the
> waitress, and one of the ears, which twitched in the air.
>
> "Don't you mean you're carrying it to London?" the waitress asked.
>
> "I mean what I say."
And a willingness to reproduce the playful weirdness, rather than just the
signifiers! Tremendous!
> "Alice? Algernon? Dr. John Watson?" said Dirk as he followed them away
> from the doomed barrel. "This can only mean one thing. I've been
> rescued by--"
>
> "That's right," interrupted a woman's voice from the woman floating
> above him. She was wearing an oxygen mask, as well as a diving suit.
> "You've been rescued by:"
>
> "Dr. Mercedes Silver-ilver-ver-rr..."
>
> She waited for the echo to die down.
>
> "...and Her All-Ghost-ost-ost-st-t Literary-ary-ry-y-y
> Revue-ue-ue-ue."
Oh wow. XD I love this new character and her League of Extraordinary Public
Domain Characters already.
> "No time, Paragon. Malevo's evil plan is already in play in San Diego,
> California. Dr. Malevo has teamed up with Baron von Frankelin--"
>
> "Ace of Clones? The villain Franke?"
Pulling together *all* the references!
> "He used to be Paragon, the Ultimate Man, the most powerful superhero
> in the world," she whispered back. "He was also the most daft. All the
> rest of us heroes had to take turns teaming up with him, just to keep
> an eye on him."
Heeheehee <3
> "I didn't particularly think Malevo was insane, he was criminally
> boring."
>
> "--Then, we disguise ourselves as fish and sneak into--"
>
> "Back when he graduated from med school, he was Paragon's sidekick,
> The Ultimate Intern."
Backstory! Yes!
> "No, she's my ex-wife."
>
> "And she tried to kill you?"
>
> "That's the purpose of ex-wives, John," said Algernon. "Ex-marriage is
> a very special state. If any of my ex-wives were to stop trying to
> kill me, I dare say I'd assume they wanted to re-marry."
Heeheeheehee
> Dr. Mercedes Silver was yelling at him. She was now out of the diving
> suit and wearing her traditional brown suit and tie.
Ladies in suits <3
> "How do you know he was the last?" asked Watson.
>
> "I've told you not to get him off on that," hissed Mercedes.
>
> "Elementary, really. The computer has a number of recordings of him
> giving orders to himself."
Pffft. XD I love the easy flourishes that develop so splendidly and off-handedly
on established bits of business.
> "What kind of fuel does this thing run on?"
>
> "Broken dreams," Algernon said. "And it's running on full."
*ba-dum-tiss*
> She took a floppy disk out of her pocket and handed it to Sherlock
> Holmes.
>
> "MEMOREX Trackball Program Disk?"
>
> "Careful with it. Use it incorrectly, you'll conquer the world. Or die
> trying."
Very good.
> "Malevo," she said. "Malevo and an army of crazed Flemish bent on
> regaining their superpowers."
Ooooo, I'd forgotten about that.
> "They'll kill him when they realize he has no more powers."
>
> "Hey, it's the world or him."
Aw, c'mon, Dr. Silver. You're more heroic than that! I'm pretty sure!
> "Oh, god, this is my punishment for giving him superpowers, even if
> they will only last an hour.
Oh, that works too
>Algernon was piloting the saucer, while Alice
> pouted in the corner. (There was no corner on the circular bridge, but
> Alice was pretending there was, so it was all the same.)
Heeheehee.
> "I wasn't quite ready to die now."
>
> "Well, thanks. Neither was I."
>
> "I was," said Holmes. "I'd like to write a monograph on the
> experience."
Augh. LOTS of good stuff in this issue - one of my favorites so far, I think.
> "Dr. Silver, you aren't going to take on an F-14 with a handgun?"
>
> "Watch me."
Dr. Silver is definitely my favorite character.
> She gripped the gun so hard her knuckles turned white, and she pulled
> the trigger. Blood trickled from Dr. Malevo's shirt. He started. He
> looked down, and then looked back at the scared woman.
Oh man. o.o That's actually pretty cool, even if it isn't going to stick.
> When the police came to arrest the woman for carrying a firearm
> without a license, he left the situation in their capable hands.
PARAGON. >:/
> "Holmes," cried Mercedes. "It actually hurt you?"
>
> The wall shook with another barrage of bullets.
>
> "If felt like... like a hundred years worth of elite literary
> critics."
>
> "My god," she said. "A direct hit could kill any of you."
GASP! Metaweapons! Like Dip, but worse!
> The wall exploded inward. One fragment rebounded from the wall behind
> the makeshift barrier and grazed Dr. Silver on the temple, tearing a
> bloody gash. She tasted the blood and smiled. This, then, was the
> Ultimate Adventure.
oh noooo Dr. Silver
> "I can," said Paragon. "Besides, I have to rescue the Ultimate Co-Ed.
> What's five hundred megatons between friends?"
Paragon is definitely that heroic.
> The second grabbed for his commbox and she kicked it out of his hand
> as he lifted it towards his mouth. Surprised, he managed to grab her
> foot and twist it, and she fell to her ass. As she fell, she twisted
> her other leg around and knocked his legs out from underneath him. He
> fell next to her. They swung at each other as they tried to get up. He
> connected first, and punched her straight in the jaw. She fell back,
> and lunged forward, slamming his head against the wall.
Daaaaaaaaamn. :D
> Dr. Silver dropped from the ventilation shaft into the Victorian bath.
> She moved to the door, stopped, and looked at the mirror. Her hair on
> her left side was caked in blood. One of her teeth was hanging--she
> hadn't noticed any pain. A steady rush of adrenaline continued to keep
> any pain away.
SO BADASS.
> He turned around carrying a bottle of wine and two glasses.
>
> "An Eighteen Sixty-Four MourvËdre, perhaps? Would you do the honors?"
>
> She laughed.
>
> "No, you are the host, after all."
>
> "Of course," he nodded approvingly. "Then perhaps a simple '59
> Grenache would be more appropriate."
Interesting.
> "Are you injured?" he whispered hoarsely.
>
> She pulled back her hair and showed him the bloody gash. He cackled
> blood and went silent.
>
> "I hope you go to hell, Jerry. I think I'd miss you otherwise."
>
> The nuclear warhead exploded beneath the ancient house, and Dr.
> Mercedes Silver went with Baron Jerold von Frankelin to their next
> great adventure.
This is such a weird issue. @-@ Clearly written from a "what I want to write
about" perspective, but in a high-level way.
> One of these days, I've got to finish that mail-order teleportation
> course, he thought, as the penis symbol exploded in a blaze of white
> glory.
Welp.
> Lastly, it pictured to itself how these same writers would, in the
> after-time, be themselves orange cats; and how they would keep,
> through all their furrier years, the simple and loving hearts of their
> writing apprenticeship; and how they would gather about them other
> young writers and make their eyes bright and eager with many a strange
> tale, perhaps even with the dream of the Internet of long ago: and how
> the old cats would feel all the young writers' simple sorrows, and
> find pleasure in all their simple joys, remembering their own
> writing-life, and the happy Internet days.
Heeheehee. <3
> * Next Issue: Ghost, Ghost, Gander
I wasn't sure if there was going to be one, at this point. XD
Drew "such fascinating weirdness" Perron
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