REPOST: RAC Challenge! #11
Drew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Wed Nov 11 00:11:33 PST 2015
And now that I'm back, get ready for a STORM OF REPLIES.
On 10/13/2015 7:03 PM, Arthur Spitzer wrote:
> Chapter by Rob Rogers who is best known for his
> Easily-Discovered Man LNH series as well as
> writing various other LNH stuff. I think this
> maybe the only time he wrote outside of the LNH
> imprint during his tenure on RACC..
>
> But like most of Rob's stuff it's incredibly
> funny stuff.
YEAH! Rob is the raddest. I'd love to see him do a Mighty Medley piece.
> "Now there's irony for you," Tito said, leveling his pistol at the
> Ultimate Man's chest. "The one person who might have saved you is
> removed from the fight because of the shock you caused her... Good
> Lord! That potion, which was supposed to lower the iron in your
> bloodstream..."
>
> "Has only eliminated the isotopes Iron-A, Iron-B, Iron-C, and Iron-D
> from my body," Paragon finished. "I still have enormous quantities of
> Iron-E left in my system--which, as you've noticed, has produced some
> unfortunate side effects."
:D :D :D I love it
> "Very well, Paragon," Tito said. "Even if you have been transformed
> into the world's most ironic human being, you can't possibly dodge a
> stream of bullets at this range.
Why would you couple those clauses. TITO YOU HAVE BROUGHT THIS ON YOURSELF.
> The buzzer rang, interrupting Paragon's soliloquy. "Tamponading
> tuataras!" he marveled.
Rob is SO GOOD at the ridiculous stylishness.
> "Dirk?" said the voice, surprised. "It's Myrna. I was looking for
> Paragon."
>
> "Uhh... yes, of course," Paragon said, cursing himself for forgetting
> to lower his voice several octaves. "I... uh... watch the place while
> the master is away. C'mon up."
Manos references are always fresh.
> Working as
> fast as only he could, Dixon City's Ultimate Man mopped, cleaned,
> polished, repaired the damaged window, freshened the rug, stacked Tito
> and Tina in the closet, changed his clothes, calculated and debated
> the merits of a balanced budget amendment,
It's a trap! </Ackbar>
> and negotiated a lasting
> peace between Israel and several Palestinian splinter groups in the
> time it took for Myrna to ascend the stairs to his apartment.
>
> "Thank the Lord the elevator's still on the fritz, or I never would
> have been able to get them to agree to bilateral disarmament," Paragon
> thought.
Perfection.
> "Waitaminute," Dirk said, the gears of his brain tumbling like those
> of a well-oiled Swiss watch. "How, exactly, do you and Tito know each
> other?"
>
> "We've had a few run-ins before," Myrna said mildly, pushing her bangs
> back into place. "Nasty little things, those twins.
This gets back to the "introducing new twists and turns" section of the cascade
- desperately needed after previous "simplifying" retcons.
> This makes what I
> have to say to Paragon all the more urgent. Do you have any idea where
> he might be?"
>
> "He's right here," Dirk said. "I am Paragon, the Ultimate Man."
>
> There were a few moments of startled silence before Myrna said, "Oh."
>
> Then, "Oh" again.
>
> Then, "I don't know where to begin..."
>
> "Begin with what you came here to tell me," Paragon said, the element
> of confidence having returned to his voice.
See, this is a good way to do this sort of thing. An emotional reaction, shelved
for the moment in crisis, leaving the audience tingling in anticipation of later
feels.
> "Don't worry," Myrna replied. "I'll take care of them. But, Para...
> Dirk... why did you tell me?"
>
> "Because it's the truth," Paragon said. "It had to come out sooner or
> later, here or anywhere else. I wanted you to be the one to hear it."
Yessssssss. Rob clearly cares about these silly characters, or at least, the
archetypes that inspired them.
> For instance, I never told you my true
> name... the one my father gave me... Myrna Malevo!"
>
> "Doctor Malevo's daughter!" Paragon gasped.
>
> "Hey, you're good," Mary Lu said. "You must have read a lot of Hardy
> Boys mysteries while growing up."
*cackles*
> Myrna smiled, Paragon screamed noiselessly, and Mary Lu covered her
> eyes in horror as the deadly particle beams fused the bodies of Tito
> and Tina together, forming them into one, shimmering, bloblike-proty
> that glowed with pulsating radiation.
My one criticism of this issue is that this is a *weirdly* dark thing to happen,
considering the tone here. Not that there haven't been whiplash-y tone shifts
before in the series, but they've mostly been between different writers, not in
a single chapter. That said, this is setup for a *really* interesting
cliffhanger/joke...
> "You will now assume the spirit, personality, powers and abilities of
> the being whose name you next hear," Myrna declared.
>
> The protoplasmic being nodded in assent, just as the uninvited guest
> to Malevo's rebirth glanced for the first time at the horror being
> assembled in his laboratory.
>
> "Almighty God... ," the figure gasped, in a voice loud enough to be
> recorded by Myrna Malevo's microphone.
>
> Myrna screamed as an unearthly light burst forth from the chamber.
Wonderful.
> * Next issue: Chapter 12: "Point of Departure" or "Divine is Easy,
> Comedy is Hard" by Bill Keir
In terms of giving the next writer a challenge, Rob hits it out of the park.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, workin' on it
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