SW10: New Bosnia #4: The Land of Guns and Women
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Sun Jan 4 08:53:50 PST 2015
On 12/28/2014 7:53 PM, Scott Eiler wrote:
<snop>
> Scott could see artillery shells flying toward them.
A story that starts with the characters attacking the author! How daring!
> "Overmazzster Szzcott, my mazzter szzeekszz a Queen."
Ahhhhh, nice.
> "Oh, you moron. Now the whole Turkish Army knows how to command him. So, on
> that note..." Psychovant yelled in amplified voice, "Gavrilo! Release my demon!"
Whoa. o.ov
> A bolt of energy came from the monster bee's eyes, and struck the duck.
>
> The duck morphed. It grew. It became more like a cartoon. Its mouth grew
> fangs. And its eyes spouted flame.
AWESOME. And might I say, I especially like "my demon".
> Psychovant looked down at Scott Stiles. "Still wanna hold on to me?"
>
> "You're a demon? *Now more than ever!*" Scott slammed the demon duck back
> and forth onto the pavement. Wham Wham Wham Wham!
He's got his cartoon physics powers back!
> One woman in Turkish army uniform dashed up to him. "Super-Savior! Come with
> me if you want to live!"
>
> "Huh?"
>
> "I'm from the True USA! We can help free your friends! But you have to get
> away with me right now!"
Ooooo. The semi-heroic rebellion!
> "Oh..." Scott Stiles looked around. His duck was gone. His bees were bowing
> before the new bee queen. And he couldn't even believe he was trying to count
> ducks and bees in his army of the faithful.
Heeheehee.
> And the bunny in Scott's pocket said, "*Nothing??*"
Hah! <3
> I should release this before I overthink it.
Always good.
> I spent so much time writing this series, some new developments arose among
> Monster Bees. It seems they have inborn protocols of what to do if they are
> removed from their hierarchy. So Scott Stiles has a mutiny on his hands.
Yes! Good tie-in.
> That's the
> great advantage of character-driven comics... the plots make more sense.
IT'S TRUE.
> But
> let's remember, Psychovant can go anywhere - and he can even come back!
> Especially with the Atomic Bunny still around!
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, best enemies
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