WWW: Ripping Off King Arthur #229 -- A Suicide in Destiny City (Part Thirteen)

[Scott Eiler]

On 2/15/2015 12:53 PM, Arthur Spitzer wrote:

> The Cowboy Graveyard Part One...
>
> http://www.rippingoffkingarthur.com/a-suicide-in-destiny-city-index/a-suicide-in-destiny-city-part-thirteen/
>
> Arthur "Check it out..." Spitzer

Here at the start of Part 2, I don't get a sense of the story charging 
forward toward conflict and resolution.  I know that not every story 
does that.  But this is a great mood piece.  This episode in particular 
is good at describing your story universe and making the characters look 
human.

-- 
(signed) Scott Eiler  8{D> -------- http://www.eilertech.com/ ---------

When you *are* the leader... whatever goes wrong... whether you did it
or not... *you* are held responsible. - Barack Obama

I know. - Archie Andrews

- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.