8FOLD/HCC: Journey Into # 20, "Her Face In My Mirror"
Scott Eiler
seiler at eilertech.com
Fri Feb 6 21:24:10 PST 2015
On 2/2/2015 7:15 PM, Tom Russell wrote:
> DRAMATIS PERSONAE.
> - Kate Morgan, DR. METRONOME II.
> Can phase through matter.
> Concert pianist, aged 28 in 2013.
> - Kate's siblings and wards:
> - Simon Morgan, aged 18.
> Knows Kate's secret identity.
> - Calliope Morgan, this close to 16,
> practically an adult already so
> just leave me alone.
After a while I got the impression Kate Morgan had given birth to those
other two. I'm glad I re-read this part.
> - The Bethanys, Kate's two best friends,
> both of whom know her secret identity:
> - Bethany Proust, 36, homicide detective,
> formerly Kate's babysitter, called
> "Bethany One".
> - Bethany Clayton, KNOCKOUT MOUSE, 30,
> like Kate, a member of the Daylighters.
> Called "Bethany Two."
You've done nice things with (what I assume is) a coincidence.
<snip story>
I've no comments on the meat of the story, but I enjoyed it and I saw no
plot holes.
> "Oh, don't look so glum. You would've caught it eventually.
> After all, you are my favorite Bethany."
> "Except for the other one."
> "Well, yeah."
I know a pair of twin brothers, whom I greet for their birthday in
similar manner. I don't declare favorites, but I do try to greet each
one before the other.
> "So I noticed something," says Bethany. "Ever since Paige Pond was
> arrested, no one's seen Dr. Metronome."
> "I noticed that, too," says Kate.
> "Does that mean that Paige Pond was Dr. Metronome?" says Bethany.
> "Who will be remembered for all time as both a plucky heroine, and
> also an unrepentant and violent psychopath?"
> "I don't much like the sound of that," says Kate, wincing. "But I
> honestly don't know what it means, Beth. If I knew what I was doing
> with my life, I probably wouldn't be doing it."
This seems like sequel-bait to me. But I often lay sequel-bait and then
ignore it for years.
> After Bethany leaves, Kate turns to her piano, playing In the Bottoms.
> As she pauses between Honey and Barcarolle, she catches a glimpse of a
> face in the lacquered and polished maple, clouded and featureless.
oooh, foreshadowing!
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- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.
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