MISC: The Girl Who Saved The World, part 1

Drew Perron pwerdna at gmail.com
Sun Dec 27 23:33:27 PST 2015

On 12/18/2015 10:34 PM, George Phillies wrote:
> I had a thought, namely reordering things by interchanging Chapters 1
> and 2, and establishing what she is, in the first few paragraphs:
> Chapter One - Flashforward
> The Invisible Fortress
> Evening
> January 11, 2018
> I awoke at half past dark.  To put it mildly, I hurt.  Some places hurt
> even more than others.

Ohhhhh, that's good. I like that idea a lot - show the aftermath, then flash 
back to the action.

Drew "super crunchy" Perron

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