REPOST: RAC Challenge! #4
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Tue Aug 25 18:28:01 PDT 2015
On 8/25/2015 8:08 PM, Arthur Spitzer wrote:
<snip>
> "Jorge Steinhoofer, how does it feel to be responsible for the city's
> imminent doom? Is Spurgo now on the managerial hotseat?"
>
> "I just don't understand," replied the team owner. "He's so big now,
> and what happened to his mustache...?"
That's great. XD
> "But Dr. Flagler!" interrupted Tina. "We found this on the floor while
> we were leaving!" She presented a small, multi-colored orb.
>
> "So?" retorted Merton. "It's a superball. I had one when I was a kid."
>
> "But it's not a ball. Look." She handed it to him. It was very warm,
> and felt like polished stone. "And we've never seen Paragon without
> it. It's usually in the amulet attached to his cloak. We're worried
> about him, and we thought that DIOS could help."
Yay worldbuilding! It's really building nicely on itself here, but though soon
it'll start twisting into knots...
> You have failed your teaching. You ransomed your life using a man's
> stolen possession. You bargained with evil. Your training and the
> sacrifices made for it have gone for naught.
Oooooh. That's a pretty good point.
> "I'll..." he had a sudden inspiration. "I'll join a higher power! I'll
> remake the universe! I'll hold my breath! I'll... I'll... I'll bite
> off my hand! I'll...do something..." Dirk knew a losing situation. He
> let this last sentence trail off into nothing.
>
> The Collective ignored him. Go now, Mary Lu of earth. Go and become a
> Champion. White light bathed the area of The Chambers where the new
> Ultimate Woman stood, and soon she faded out of sight.
And this is an excellent challenge to give to one's protagonist.
> Some notes from the author: Thanks should go to Mike Kelly for giving
> us that really nifty dream sequence to play with. As indicated here,
> Spurgo was just a continuation of that dream, but the images presented
> before it are playing an important part in the story now. Daniel
> Warren said it was o.k. to retcon the grapefruit thang, so there you
> go, Dan. 8^)
These both seems like a reasonable level of retcon. We will see the level
increase. u.u
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, increase the beast!
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