MISC: GODLING # 39: The Fall of Godling part 2: Powerless! by J. Vandersteen
Scott Eiler
seiler at eilertech.com
Wed May 14 20:50:00 PDT 2014
On 5/14/2014 11:32 AM, jvdsteen1974 at gmail.com wrote:
> GODLING # 39: The Fall of Godling part 2: Powerless! by J. Vandersteen
...
> Quentin took the vial and drank. His wounds closed magically.
> "Thanks. For saving my bacon there and for the potion. And for all
> the advice and believing in me. It was an honour knowing you."
>
> "As it was mine. Farewell, Quentin." With a flash of pink light she
> is gone.
One quibble: You mixed tenses here. But I'm glad to see Our Hero
survived and wasn't *entirely* betrayed by Our Gods.
> A reporter stands in front of a camera, saying, "We're here at the
> premiere of Days of the Gods where actor/superstar Marcus Brant has
> just arrived. We're eager to talk to him about his new movie and
> about the rumours of his relationship with Scarlett Johanson..."
>
> Just around the corner stand Hermes, Apollo and Ares, eyeing the
> arrival of the superstar. They wear trench coats that hide their
> ancient, godlike attire.
Trench coats don't make a lot of sense in Los Angeles. Indeed, they'd
probably stand out more in trench coats than they would in gleaming
armor. My kind of Ares would probably dress like a movie stuntman.
> "Are you sure Zeus meant this pretty boy?" Ares asks his brothers.
Now that's my kind of Ares.
> NEXT ISSUE: The All-New, All-Different Godling!
Oooh!
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- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.
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