SMC: Tales From Ohio Academy #2

[Scott Eiler]

On 12/16/2014 7:52 PM, Andrew Perron wrote:
> Previously, on Tales From Ohio Academy!
>
>      Her first day was going pretty well so far!
>
>      A taunt by a bully, and a pointed invitation to an after-class
>      fight? Holy crap!
>
> And now, the conclusion!

If you'd just included "You're going to get a really warm greeting after 
school!" in the recap, the story would have made a bit more sense to me. 
  But as it is, it's a perfectly good teen adventure story.  There's no 
reason a teen adventure story needs to involve fisticuffs, and ideally 
it never should.  The Powernaut is thinking of doing more of those...


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When you *are* the leader... whatever goes wrong... whether you did it
or not... *you* are held responsible. - Barack Obama

I know. - Archie Andrews

- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.