MISC: OCTO-BOY # 4: Raiders Unmasked! by J. Vandersteen

Scott Eiler seiler at eilertech.com
Fri Dec 12 19:55:06 PST 2014


On 12/11/2014 2:40 AM, Andrew Perron wrote:
> On 11/28/2014 3:42 PM, jvdsteen1974 at gmail.com wrote:
> <snip>
>> "But can you take a bullet?" Johnson asks him and put his pistol against
>  > the back of the hero's head.
>> "Don't need to find out," Octo-Boy says and uses a leg-tentacle to
>> pull on
>  > Johnson's ankle, The FBI agent falls down, on the back of his head.
>
> Hmmmmmm. It feels like the big climax against the main villain needs...
> *more*, somehow. You're good at throwing in cool bits, and that's what
> it seems like it needs!

Oh, it worked for me in the early 1960s tradition.  Our Hero's enemies 
don't get to extend the episode unless they're at least as cool as 
Doctor Octopus...  heh heh, I said Octopus.  8{D>

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When you *are* the leader... whatever goes wrong... whether you did it
or not... *you* are held responsible. - Barack Obama

I know. - Archie Andrews

- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.


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