DIVA: The DYAL Goes to Eleven #0
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Sun Dec 7 16:12:46 PST 2014
On 12/7/2014 3:53 PM, deucexm wrote:
> On Sunday, December 7, 2014 2:21:04 PM UTC-6, Tom Russell wrote:
>> More than the worldbuilding, or the story, or anything else-- though it's all fine-- I want to commend you on the clear, crisp, sprightliness of your prose. Every sentence is very fine, almost a little poem, and exhibits a mastery of tone.
>> Not to mention the semicolons. God bless a man who can use a semicolon.
>That's very kind of you! I'm half-tempted to post the two chapters of
> Anakh the Jackal-God and see what you think of those, then, since Mr.
> Perron seems so enamored of them. Very different style and tone there,
> sort of mythological-retelling. (Probably needs some work though...)
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, highly
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