DIVA: The DYAL Goes to Eleven #0

Scott Eiler seiler at eilertech.com
Sun Dec 7 15:42:51 PST 2014

On 12/7/2014 12:53 PM, deucexm wrote:
> On Sunday, December 7, 2014 2:21:04 PM UTC-6, Tom Russell wrote:
>> More than the worldbuilding, or the story, or anything else--
>> though it's all fine-- I want to commend you on the clear, crisp,
>> sprightliness of your prose. Every sentence is very fine, almost a
>> little poem, and exhibits a mastery of tone.
>> Not to mention the semicolons. God bless a man who can use a
>> semicolon.
> That's very kind of you!  I'm half-tempted to post the two chapters
> of Anakh the Jackal-God and see what you think of those, then, since
> Mr. Perron seems so enamored of them.  Very different style and tone
> there, sort of mythological-retelling.  (Probably needs some work
> though...)

I have always claimed the right to rewrite my stories after review on 
RACC.  In one such story I introduced a plot element Andrew P suggested, 
and it basically made the story. 

(signed) Scott Eiler  8{D> -------- http://www.eilertech.com/ ---------

When you *are* the leader... whatever goes wrong... whether you did it
or not... *you* are held responsible. - Barack Obama

I know. - Archie Andrews

- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.

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