DIVA: The DYAL Goes to Eleven #0

[deucexm]

On Sunday, December 7, 2014 2:21:04 PM UTC-6, Tom Russell wrote:
> More than the worldbuilding, or the story, or anything else-- though it's all fine-- I want to commend you on the clear, crisp, sprightliness of your prose. Every sentence is very fine, almost a little poem, and exhibits a mastery of tone.
> 
> Not to mention the semicolons. God bless a man who can use a semicolon.

That's very kind of you!  I'm half-tempted to post the two chapters of Anakh the Jackal-God and see what you think of those, then, since Mr. Perron seems so enamored of them.  Very different style and tone there, sort of mythological-retelling.  (Probably needs some work though...)