DIVA: The DYAL Goes to Eleven #0

Tom Russell joltcity at gmail.com
Sun Dec 7 12:21:03 PST 2014

On Saturday, December 6, 2014 9:00:02 AM UTC-5, deucexm wrote:
> The DYAL Goes to Eleven: A DiVerse Alpha Chronicle
> by Colin Stokes

More than the worldbuilding, or the story, or anything else-- though it's all fine-- I want to commend you on the clear, crisp, sprightliness of your prose. Every sentence is very fine, almost a little poem, and exhibits a mastery of tone.

Not to mention the semicolons. God bless a man who can use a semicolon.


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