MISC: The Deck
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Sun Mar 3 12:47:10 PST 2013
On Mar 1, 11:07 pm, mrnelson... at gmail.com wrote:
> Hey guys. So I've been toying with a couple of other ideas here. I can't write Lydia forever after all.
> ...actually maybe I could, but sometimes even the most dedicated of us have to mix it up, right? So
> this is an idea that I had been toying with for a while, and then, at the request of a friend, I started to
> write up this sort of sample. I think there's potential for a universe here, and I'll probably explore it
> more as I have time, though Lydia is still my primary focus. Anyway, let me know what you all think.
> For now, enjoy what I have tentatively named The Deck.
I just want to point out that this is an EXCELLENT example of show-
don't-tell and fleshing out the shape of a universe through hints and
natural dialogue. <3
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, who knows how this universe works
and is impressed by which bits were chosen to hint at.
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