LNH20: A Drop of Blood
Adrian J. McClure
mrfantastic7 at gmail.com
Tue Mar 20 18:24:07 PDT 2012
On Mar 15, 12:11 pm, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> Oooooh, awesome! So... what do you call this?
Well, I just called it "Drop of Blood add-on" on the wiki, so that
should be fine.
> > "He's right," said Fearless Leader, a note of regret in his voice. He
> > idly touched the dial on the side of his ray gun. He'd never had to
> > set it on "kill" for as long as the LNH had been around, but the
> > setting was still there if he needed it.
> I really like the idea that the world is getting less grim-and-gritty as we
> move away from The Killfile.
I just realized this was a minor continuity error--Fearless Leader
used a gun to kill one of the Lycopersicons in LNH20CP #1. I'm not
really sure how to No-Prize that. There were actually a couple of
things in that issue which clashed with elements I established later,
such as Doc Nostalgia casually breaking the fourth wall. This was the
first issue, though, and early issues or episodes of any given series
often have things that don't quite fit with later installments. I
could lampshade that later on.
> Hmmmmm. This is the only bit that really feels out of character to me; I
> don't think he's the kind of person who would lash out with insults, even
> when in the funkiest funk. (Which reminds me, I really do need to write Kid
> Enthusiastic Unlimited, to show how he *is* in the funkiest funk.) (And the
> "Doc N is a Gary Stu" thing doesn't count as insulting, just defensive of
> Emme. Is different.)
That's certainly fair. I am definitely looking forward to reading
> > As if
> > on cue, Pantra walked by, muttering under her breath. Probably it was
> > because of a certain young ninja. Or because Fearless Leader had told
> > her again that she couldn't eat Cranium. Or... well, there were any
> > number of reasons Pantra could be angry, but Ultimate Mercenary was
> > certainly one of them.
It took me forever to figure out this was supposed to be a spade. (For
the uninitiated: http://mspaintadventures.wikia.com/wiki/Troll_Relationships)
> Technically, he already has a kid! Tori!
Well, often when people are caught up in the emotional intensity of
loss or feeling depressed about their lives, they wind up overlooking
the good things in their lives. Or alternatively I completely forgot
Tori even existed.
> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, also, sent this along to Yuki, who
> liked it quite a bit!
Glad to hear it!
AJM (grad school papers are the worst kind of vampires)
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