SW10/HCC: Superhuman World 2011: The Element of Surprise

[Andrew Perron]

On Thu, 23 Feb 2012 02:32:32 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> On 2/22/2012 6:39 AM, Andrew Perron wrote:

>> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, sometimes one forgets to tell the
>> readers what one already knows.
> 
> Actually, my problem was that I'd chosen a viewpoint character who was 
> inflicting the surprise, not one who was receiving it.  He's have to 
> learn about the surprise's reception from a news analysis.  No reason he 
> can't do that on the rewrite, of course...

Ahhhhh, indeed.  Excellently-analyzed.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, I want candy.