SW10/HCC: Superhuman World 2011: The Element of Surprise
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Thu Feb 23 12:34:45 PST 2012
On Thu, 23 Feb 2012 02:32:32 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> On 2/22/2012 6:39 AM, Andrew Perron wrote:
>> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, sometimes one forgets to tell the
>> readers what one already knows.
> Actually, my problem was that I'd chosen a viewpoint character who was
> inflicting the surprise, not one who was receiving it. He's have to
> learn about the surprise's reception from a news analysis. No reason he
> can't do that on the rewrite, of course...
Ahhhhh, indeed. Excellently-analyzed.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, I want candy.
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