SW10/HCC: Summer of Discontent #4: The Myth

[Andrew Perron]

On Sat, 1 Oct 2011 01:32:12 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> On 9/26/2011 1:13 PM, Andrew Perron wrote:

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>> ...you know, this whole time, I've been vague on what they're actually
>> trying to *do*.
> 
> Did I manage to explain it acceptably?

To the Trillions?  Nope.

>> Interesting.  Makes sense, though I'd have figured a dollop of actual
>> magic in there.
> 
> Maaaybe.  Other witnesses would probably figure that too, if they 
> believed in magic.  Now, were there any other witnesses in the room...?

Ah, yes, the same limited-perspective thing.  Fair enough.

>> Neither death was cheap, definitely.  However, I think they both
>> needed more buildup; in particular, I would've liked to see some setup
>> for the whole "weakened in captivity" thing.
> 
> I'll have rewrites on the site shortly, because Friday night isn't 
> *just* for doing the laundry.  8{D>

Woo!

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, humbledore.