[MV] The Super Wizard From Space #8

[Andrew Perron]

On Wed, 11 May 2011 04:17:56 +0000 (UTC), Wil Alambre wrote:

> "We was partners for all them space-years, looking for proof
> about the silver skull machine. Looking for that damn map. I
> figured you of all sentient beings woulda understood about
> regrets. About mistakes you thought couldn't been taken
> away."

This is an excellent moment of characterization.

> A monstrous space-bee, the size of an asteroid and made
> entirely of purple-tinted shield energy.

Wooooooo!  Awesome!

> This issue clocks in at approximately two thousand words
> (not counting these notes), about five hundred words more
> than I originally wanted. But I couldn't a good place to
> break it up nor any content to cut out. So rather than force
> it, I'm posting it at this length. I'm still determined that
> most future issues remain short though!

Hey, it worked for me!

> I had a chance to run this arc and some ideas for future
> arcs past a friend, despite my initial never-plot-ahead
> gameplan. I was getting tripped up on where I was going with
> this and how I was going to move forward with the whole
> tournament shtick. With luck, this will make the next few
> arcs link together smoother.

That's good.  A dollop of planning really smooths things out.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, hopforward!