[MV] The Super Wizard From Space #7
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Fri May 6 16:00:55 PDT 2011
On Tue, 3 May 2011 23:01:34 +0000 (UTC), Wil Alambre wrote:
> "The third rule, each challenge must
> be witnessed by a space-champion. A third one. That is not
> involved in the fight."
Has this one been followed so far?
> "Pete?" Gavrilo spat back in radio waves. "Is that you, you
> traitorous tako?"
I love this line.
> "Shut up! Shut up about my mother!" the furious screaming was
> almost impossible to make out over the transmissions.
Not the reaction I was expecting!
> If this issue seems off, then you're not alone. With a busy
> schedule over the last couple weeks, I found myself with next to
> no time to finish this issue before my self-imposed Tuesday
> deadline. I kind of find the end result a little exposition-heavy
> and not much forward progress in the plot (it kind of ends in the
> same place as the previous issue). I'll try to do better next time.
Honestly, I liked it. Very flavorful; exposition isn't a bad thing, as
long as it's delivered with characterization and care. And you seem to
have a knack for pulling out new, interesting facts about the characters.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, In Space!
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