MISC: Shadow Shift #1
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Mon Jun 13 03:45:53 PDT 2011
On Sun, 12 Jun 2011 23:42:21 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> Possibly the ending was abrupt, but the story was fine. Nicely done, and I
> look forward to more.
Perhaps-interestingly, the abruptness was due to a comment from me - there
was a paragraph more in the first draft, and I thought this was a better
place to stop.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, wonk wonk!
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