MISC: Shadow Shift #1

Scott Eiler seiler at eilertech.com
Sun Jun 12 16:42:21 PDT 2011


"Ryunosuke" <ffivfan at hotmail.com> wrote in message 
news:<it0jc6$3pq$1 at usenet-its.stanford.edu>...

> "Hey there. How was school?"
> Josh shrugs, idly picking at his dinner. "Fine."
> "Keeping up with homework?"
> Josh nods.
> "...everything going alright?"
> Josh nods.
> "...alright, then."
>
> Josh doesn't speak up again, and they continue eating in silence.

Possibly the ending was abrupt, but the story was fine.  Nicely done, and I 
look forward to more. 



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