[MV] The Super Wizard From Space #14: The Tragedy Of Sharkasaurus Rex, Part 4

[Andrew Perron]

On Fri, 15 Jul 2011 01:30:17 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> On 7/13/2011 7:45 PM, Wil Alambre wrote:

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>> I'm not sure how much of a last-issue recap sort of thing is usually
>> required. I'm still experimenting with different techniques. This
>> time I decided to embrace a full old-fashioned recap, just like
>> anthology comics sometimes did.
> 
> I think it's okay.  With this one, you added stuff for clarification.
> That's even better.

Yeah!  A recap every once in a while is a good thing.

>> Overall, this shark story arc started out as a fun idea, but i
>> believe I weighed it down with extraneous characters, foo much
>> exposition, and clumsily explained concepts. Also, I've strayed from
>> the fun golden-age short punchy story concept I started out with.
>> I'll try to wrap this arc up next ish and see if I can rediscover
>> it's original feel.
> 
> Actually, one of the things I like best about this series is that it 
> grew up quickly.  Peppy little stories about stomping on space unicorns 
> are cute for one issue or two, but you've got some impressive space 
> opera with high drama going on here.

I think it could go back towards the punchiness end of the spectrum a bit
without losing anything.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, kaboosh!