[MV] The Super Wizard From Space #13

[Andrew Perron]

On Sun, 3 Jul 2011 02:09:03 +0000 (UTC), Wil Alambre wrote:

> Andrew Perron wrote:
>> On Wed, 29 Jun 2011 18:40:10 +0000 (UTC), Wil Alambre wrote:
>>
>>> Seeing the mummy machine coldly crushing the phantasmal fish, she only
>>> waved dismissively in it's direction. "Pleasze, M, you may releasze
>>> them. We are unharmed. Thisz isz not our true form. We are not even
>>> here, chooszing to participate by long-disztance communication. And asz
>>> you can szee, the transzmisszion technology in this honey-baszed
>>> hologram has easzily repaired itszelf."
>>
>> Ah, of *course* it was a projective medium made of honey!
> 
> I enjoyed the visual of it and I actually have *gasp* plans for the 
> concept, but I still recognize that I could have set it up a little 
> better, especially if I plan on using it a couple times in the future. 
> In the near future, I'll make a point to better describe this 
> bee-technology a bit. :)

I didn't have a problem with it, personally - made intuitive sense.

>>> "Sharkasaurus Rex is free!"
>>
>> Dun dun dunnnnnnn!
> 
> Looking back, I should probably have had this line say "Sharkasaurus Rex 
> is loose!" instead, as the term 'free' has specific connotations in this 
> arc.

Yeah, that would've made it a bit clearer.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, rex'd!