MISC: One Day at a Time #13
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Wed Apr 27 18:28:45 PDT 2011
On Thu, 28 Apr 2011 00:56:42 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> James Mason wrote:
>> Chapter 13:
>> Always the Lucky Ones
>>
>> *By the way, we are now in the police department. Just thought you'd
>> like to know.*
>
> I was confused when I read this narration, especially since you keep talking
> about a mysterious Voice. Maybe you could label the narration "Narrator".
> That'd give any of your characters who talk across the Fourth Wall someone to
> talk to.
I've been adding an Announcer to some of the earlier issues in editing
(trying to give it a radio-style feel). Perhaps this is a useful tool?
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, all we hear is, radio gaga~
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