SW10: December 2010 #5: Cauldron Book II Part 5 (of 7)

[Andrew Perron]

On Fri, 1 Apr 2011 01:18:47 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> Andrew Perron wrote:

>> As to the former, I don't think she was writing it *while* having a truck
>> fall on her...
> 
> Actually, she did!  Brain2Web isn't *just* for giving villains an excuse to whip 
> out their pocketknives and do brain surgery.

Ohhhhh.  Actually, that makes sense.

> In-story, the editor of the Superhuman World web site (formerly Wyatt Ferguson, 
> now his boss Katerina Katzmann) edits the Brain2Web feed to produce a coherent 
> account.  That's probably a good thing for her to announce in Editor's Notes at 
> the start of each book of Cauldron.  

Indeed!  I'm pretty sure it was mentioned early on in the first series, but
by this point it'd totally slipped my mind.

> It might be a shame that Ms. Katzmann has 
> English as a second language, and can't properly reflect the best wording that 
> Summer should have been using as she lost consciousness...

Ah, yes, of course `-`

<toe golems>
>> I'm... that phrase needs more details! @-@
> 
> If you think so, Summer probably thinks so too.  I'll have her ask some 
> questions in the rewrite.  But she'll be asking them the day after, because 
> there are more pressing concerns on the day she meets the Toe Golems.

Indeed.  DUN DUN DUNNNN.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, doo doo de doo-doo