StarFall: Silver Arrow #3: Observatory of Danger

[Phantasm]

On Sep 13, 10:20 pm, Scott Eiler <sei... at eilertech.com> wrote:
> On Sep 13, 4:25 pm, Phantasm <phantom_belc... at yahoo.com> wrote:
>
> > Sorry about the lateness of this post.  Looking back, I realize that
> > it's been over 4 months since the previous issue.  I'd like to say
> > that it was under revision for most of that time, but the truth is I
> > tossed out about three dozen two-paragraph false starts in the
> > meantime.
>
> I see you resolved the fight problem.  It read pretty well.  But I'll
> admit I concentrated on the other parts of the story.  Was that a
> deathtrap at the start?

*sheepish grin* Yes, it was.  Lampshaded, no less; the classic 1960s
Adam West Batman.