StarFall: Silver Arrow #3: Observatory of Danger

Scott Eiler seiler at eilertech.com
Mon Sep 13 19:20:10 PDT 2010


On Sep 13, 4:25 pm, Phantasm <phantom_belc... at yahoo.com> wrote:

> Sorry about the lateness of this post.  Looking back, I realize that
> it's been over 4 months since the previous issue.  I'd like to say
> that it was under revision for most of that time, but the truth is I
> tossed out about three dozen two-paragraph false starts in the
> meantime.

I see you resolved the fight problem.  It read pretty well.  But I'll
admit I concentrated on the other parts of the story.  Was that a
deathtrap at the start?


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