SW10: October 2010 #1: The Sunset Door
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Sat Nov 20 15:17:57 PST 2010
On Nov 18, 5:56 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> Replying to old stories from work!
> I liked this. It had a nice elegaic feeling. My only quibble is that
> I could've used more of a sense of place; it describes the location at
> the beginning, but some description along with the dialogue would've
> fleshed it out.
> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, elegy!
Description of what? The ambiance of the private dining room, or the
view through the Sunset Door?
Thanks for the nice review of my mournful story.
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