SW10, HCC: September 2010 #1: The Sinking, Part 1

[Andrew Perron]

On Wed, 27 Oct 2010 22:08:59 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> On Oct 26, 12:29 pm, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
>> On Sat, 16 Oct 2010 23:38:16 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> 
>>> The Whale Woman thinks this is the Sign Of The Apocalypse or
>>> something. Aw, come on. Lots of people say that, but mankind's still
>>> here.
>>
>> This is a great attitude - and how I feel a good chunk of the time.
> 
> I usually don't.  But someone in my universe ought to.

Honestly, I don't think our real world's doing badly at all, especially
when you compare it to fifty years ago, or a hundred.

>> One nitpick: You use the phrase "salmon powers" a *lot*.  We can figure out
>> she's using her salmon powers without it being explicitly pointed out for
>> the sixteenth time.
> 
> Oops, I hadn't counted.  But Nell's a simple writer, and the World
> Journal Monthly is for a simple audience.  I can understand how its
> editors might want to ram the point home.  Still, I suppose I can do
> another editorial pass for the permanent record...

Good enough for me!

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, smoop joomp.