SW10, CONTEST: Rednecks from Mars - The Red Planet!

[Scott Eiler]

On May 23, 11:05 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Sat, 22 May 2010 23:25:04 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> > Commentator: Jason L. Cletus with Sylvester Morrow for the World
> > Journal Monthly.
>
> Cletus?  C'mon. `` (But at least it's a last name.)

The Cletus has actually shown up in my stories before.  So their
name's pretty much stuck where it is.

> Anyway!  Other than that, the main character felt like a member of this
> subculture without being a stereotype.  Well-done!

Thanks.

> The plot itself was good, although there didn't really seem to be suspense.
> Possibly a limitation of the first-person after-the-fact report format?

The World Journal Monthly can probably work around that sometime.
They have a psychic on staff, after all.  So I'll have to take the
blame for my unexciting plot myself.  I'll admit I'm still working on
that "suspense" stuff.