SW10, CONTEST: Rednecks from Mars - The Red Planet!
seiler at eilertech.com
Sun May 23 20:38:52 PDT 2010
On May 23, 11:05 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Sat, 22 May 2010 23:25:04 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:
> > Commentator: Jason L. Cletus with Sylvester Morrow for the World
> > Journal Monthly.
> Cletus? C'mon. `` (But at least it's a last name.)
The Cletus has actually shown up in my stories before. So their
name's pretty much stuck where it is.
> Anyway! Other than that, the main character felt like a member of this
> subculture without being a stereotype. Well-done!
> The plot itself was good, although there didn't really seem to be suspense.
> Possibly a limitation of the first-person after-the-fact report format?
The World Journal Monthly can probably work around that sometime.
They have a psychic on staff, after all. So I'll have to take the
blame for my unexciting plot myself. I'll admit I'm still working on
that "suspense" stuff.
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