ASH: The Pyramid Trap (one-shot)

Andrew Perron pwerdna at
Sat Jun 19 21:48:55 PDT 2010

On Thu, 17 Jun 2010 21:35:23 +0000 (UTC), Dave Van Domelen wrote:

>      Oh, and finally, in case it wasn't clear from context, Deedee landed
> with his face in Lady Lawful's bosom after the pyramid exploded.  And not,
> you know, lower.

Of course not!  That's not where second base is!

Anyway.  Good story overall!  I love the Alliance and their world of
adventure and awesome. <3 My one quibble: The climax didn't seem to have
quite the *impact* that a win against the gods should.  Not that it
should've happened differently, but maybe there should've been a bit more
buildup?  Eh, I don't care.  Yay for happy AUs.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, and situations where normal humans do
awesome stuff.

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