ASH: The Pyramid Trap (one-shot)
pwerdna at gmail.com
Sat Jun 19 21:48:55 PDT 2010
On Thu, 17 Jun 2010 21:35:23 +0000 (UTC), Dave Van Domelen wrote:
> Oh, and finally, in case it wasn't clear from context, Deedee landed
> with his face in Lady Lawful's bosom after the pyramid exploded. And not,
> you know, lower.
Of course not! That's not where second base is!
Anyway. Good story overall! I love the Alliance and their world of
adventure and awesome. <3 My one quibble: The climax didn't seem to have
quite the *impact* that a win against the gods should. Not that it
should've happened differently, but maybe there should've been a bit more
buildup? Eh, I don't care. Yay for happy AUs.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, and situations where normal humans do
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